Monday, January 31, 2011

The Soap

They're both hesitant yet excited. They're both confused yet fascinated. They're both skeptic yet lured and they both stink and need a bath.

This is a MICROFICTION MONDAY post hosted by Susan at Stony River a 140 (or less) letters/characters long to hone or challenge my creative and imaginary side.

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rainfield61 said...

It is so good to be creative and imaginative.

sylviamorice said...

Lots of fun, isn't it? Great story for this week's illustration!

Kay L. Davies said...

They certainly had a lot in common, including a need for soap. LOL
Good one.
-- K

Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel

Elizabeth Mueller said...

Whoa! I LOVE your anaphora! You so rock! <3


Jim said...

Hey Ruthi ~~ It's been so long since they've had a bath they have forgotten how good the warm water and the suds will feel!
I like your yet's, most like still's.
If those yets were but(t)s they'd get in the water fast, bottom first. Nice use of them (yet's)!
BTW, I have eleven blogs. Only four are active and just three get updates now and then.
You did good on your consolidation. I have left my others become abandoned and unlisted.

Betsy from Tennessee said...

Cute, Ruthi.... I have seen some of these memes and they are not always easy to do.... Love your idea of them needing a bath. They probably DO... ha


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